浙江新高考作文概要寫作summary writing

1、Summary writing,What is a summary?,A summary is a short statement that gives only the main points of sth, not the details.,It is a brief, complete and objective restatement of the main idea and key points of a longer com

2、position.,本文總共25分，共分為5檔,第五檔(21-25)理解準確,涵蓋全部要點。能準確使用相應的語法結構和詞匯。有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使所完成的概要結構緊湊。 完全使用自己的言語。,,,,,4C 原則,評分標準,complete,correct,coherent,concise; no copy,Step1. Read for the style and structure of the passage.

3、,How to write a summary?,,ArgumentationExpositionNarration,Recently, a wild fish restaurant was ordered to shut down in Harbin, northeast China's Heilongjiang Province. As a result, the owner of the restaurant face

4、d a fine of 500,000 yuan. Chen Yan, a tourist from Changzhou, east China’s Jiangsu Province, complained online on February 12 that he was being overcharged 10,000 yuan for three big fish at a local wild fishrestau

5、rant in Songbei District of Harbin. Worse still, he claimed that his family members were beaten and threatened by the restaurant staff when he questioned the bill at the checkout. Chen’s complaint immediately spread on

6、China’s social media. The investigation results by some local government departments showed that the restaurant had no fault, since they had already tagged the price, which raised doubt among netizens again. Further

7、 investigation showed that one type of the fish served, Huso, was not the real wild species, but a kind of farmed fish at a much lower price. Since the prices of the fish did have violated the rights of consumers, the

8、restaurant got its due punishment. Meanwhile, relevant government departments that have stood by the side of the restaurant in the first place would also be investigated and punished. Similar cases of fraudulent (

9、欺騙的) pricing at scenic spots have also been reported elsewhere in China. In October 2015, for instance, a tourist was overcharged for a course of shrimp (蝦) in the coastal city of Qingdao, east China's Shandong Pro

10、vince, when the restaurant claimed the quoted price of 38 yuan was not for the dish, but for each shrimp! Authorities say that these illegal actions will be severely punished.,Narration,When,Who,What,Why,Where,How,,5W

11、+ 1H,How to write a summary?,Step 2. Find the topic sentences or key words of each part.,Leave out details and reduce the examples.,,,,,,Recently，a wild fish restaurant was ordered to shut down in Harbin, n

12、ortheast China's Heilongjiang Province. As a result, the owner of the restaurant faced a fine of 500,000 yuan.,face a heavy fine,,when,where,what,,,,,,Chen Yan, a tourist from Changzhou, east China’s Jiangsu Province

13、, complained online on February 12 that he was being overcharged 10,000 yuan for three big fish at a local wild fish restaurant in Songbei District of Harbin. Worse still, he claimed that his family members were beaten a

14、nd threatened by the restaurant staff when he questioned the bill at the checkout.,Chen’s complaint immediately spread on China’s social media. The investigation results by some local government departments showed that t

15、he restaurant had no fault, since they had already tagged the price, which raised doubt among netizens again.,,who,,what,,Further investigation showed that one type of the fish served, Huso, was not the real wild specie

16、s, but a kind of farmed fish at a much lower price. Since the prices of the fish did have violated the rights of consumers, the restaurant got its due punishment. Meanwhile, relevant government departments that have s

17、tood by the side of therestaurant in the first place would also be investigated and punished.,why,,,Similar cases of fraudulent (欺騙的) pricing at scenic spots have also been reported elsewhere in China. In October 2015,

18、 for instance, a tourist was overcharged for a course of shrimp (蝦) in the coastal city of Qingdao, east China's Shandong Province, when the restaurantclaimed the quoted price of 38 yuan was not for the dish, but

19、for eachshrimp! Authorities say that these illegal actions will be severely punished.,,how,Step 3. Organize your own passage.1. Use your own words.2. To be concise. * omit the details * reduce t

20、he examples * simplify the descriptions * eliminate all repetitions3. To present the information fairly and do not give your own comments.4. Add transitional expressions to make your summary coherent.,How

21、to write a summary?,Skill1:_________,詞性轉換法,Skill2:__________,同義替換法,Skill3:__________,改變語態(tài)法,Skill4:___________,句式轉換法,Skill5:__________,壓縮長句法,Recently, a wild fish restaurant was ordered to shut down in Harbin and f

22、aced a heavy fine.,Lately, a wild fish restaurant in Harbin faced being shut down and a heavy fine.,,,lately/not long ago,,,require/command,,,close down,,2. Chen Yan complained he was being overcharged and were bea

23、ten and threatened by the restaurant staff. Chen’s complaint immediately spread on China’s social media.,A customer named Chen Yan exposed his being overcharged and the violent treatment of the restaurant to the publ

24、ic.,,,Chen’s complaint that … spread…,,,violent treatment,,expose… to the public,3. The restaurant got its due punishment and relevant government departments would also be investigated and punished.,,,,as well as/

25、together with/along with,The restaurant as well as some relevant government departments received their due punishment.,,,,received,4.Similar cases have also been reported elsewhere and authorities say that these illegal

26、actions will be severely punished.,,,,,happened/ took place,,,government,,will be seriously punished,will receive serious/ severe punishment,Similar cases also happened elsewhere and the government are determined to figh

27、t them.,1. Lately, a wild fish restaurant in Harbin faced being shut down and a heavy fine.,2. A customer named Chen Yan exposed his being overcharged and the violent treatment of the restaurant to the public.,3. The res

28、taurant as well as some relevant government departments received their due punishment.,4. Similar cases also happened elsewhere and the government are determined to fight them.,,One possible version：,Lately, a wild fish

29、restaurant in Harbin faced being shut down and a heavy fine, after a customer named Chen Yan exposed his being overcharged and the violent treatment of the restaurant to the public. Ultimately, after investigation, th