高考英語寫作指導(dǎo)

1、高考英語寫作指導(dǎo),welcome,Every second counts!!!,火眼金睛,,Which one is better? Why?,She always sings while doing her work.She always sings when she does her work.,After everything was finished, they began to chat with the elder

2、ly people.With everything finished, they began to chat with the elderly people.,If you study hard, you will make rapid progress.Study hard, and you will make rapid progress.,,,,,（狀從省略）,(with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)),(祈使句+ and),1.,2.,3.

3、,(A),(B),(A),(A),(B),(B),To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.,I passed the English exam because of your help.I wouldn’t have passed t

4、he English exam but for your help.,,,(名詞性從句）,（虛擬語氣）,4.,5.,(A),(A),(B),(B),,1. 詞組優(yōu)先原則,［原文］A new railway is being built in my hometown.［修正］A new railway is under construction in my hometown.,2. 地道原則,［原文］Through traveling

5、, I learned a lot of knowledge.［修正］Through traveling, I gained／obtained a lot of knowledge.,,,寫作中遵循的四項原則,4、后高長原則—后學(xué)到、較高級、較長詞匯?！　≡?詞 替換詞,3、避免重復(fù)原則,［原文］I like reading while my brother likes watchi

6、ng television.［修正］I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.,hard 　　very 　　pay attention tohappy 　　more and more,diligentlyrather extremely

7、attach importance todelighted enjoyablethe increasing number of,Correction,His fever is high.,He has a high fever.,The price of the computer is expensive.,The price of the computer is high.,The population of Chi

8、na is many.,The population of China is large.,,There were foreigners came to our school.,There were foreigners who came to our school.,I can’t imagine what life would be like if have not any TV sets.,I can’t imagine wh

9、at life would be like if we have not any TV sets.,,He closed the door and hurries away to class.,He closed the door and hurried away to class.,,very：,pretty, much, quite, greatly, highly, extremely…,important：,vital, cr

10、itical, essential, influential, meaningful, significant……,think:,believe, argue, assume, reckon, figure, point out, hold the view that…,like:,enjoy, be fond of, be in favor of, prefer….,,first/second/third:,第一： To start

11、/begin with, on one hand, initially；第二： Furthermore, in addition, besides, on the other hand, following this, moreover, next;第三： Last but not least; then, thus, consequently;,,and/but:,not only…but also, as well as, ho

12、wever, nevertheless, otherwise, whereas, on the contrary,in my opinion:,personally, as far as I am concerned, as to me, from my point of view, from my perspective,people ,persons,individuals, characters, folks,,good,posi

13、tive, favorable, rosy(美好的)，promising(有希望的)，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding,bad,dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse,,Thing:,affair, business, matter,helpful,beneficial rewarding,encourage,motivate,thank,ap

14、preciate,,be interested in,be crazy about / be absorbed in/be addicted to,try one’s best to do,spare no efforts to do,1. I could do nothing but wait here.I had no choice/option/alternative but to wait here.,Let’s beau

15、tify these sentences!,2. His carelessness was the cause of the accident.His carelessness contributed to the accident.His carelessness accounted for the accident.His carelessness was responsible for the accident.His

16、carelessness led to the accident.His carelessness resulted in the accident.,be very importantbe valuablebenefit sb.being builtrealize,be of great importancebe of valuebe of benefit to sb.=be beneficial to sb.be

17、ing constructed=be under constructionbe aware of=be conscious of,一、肯定不如雙否好,二、陳述不如倒裝妙,三、主動不如被動巧,四、從句不如分詞傲,要強化“語法、修辭”兩個概念,,四個“不如”,一、肯定不如雙否好,The postman comes on time every day. The postman never fails to come on time.,I

18、couldn’t have made so much progress in English without his help.,I have made great progress in English with his help.,1. Only when we realize the importance of environmental protection can we solve the problem of polluti

19、on. 2. So precious is time that we can’t afford to waste it.3. Diligent as he was, he failed in passing the exam.4. By no means should teenagers get into the habit of smoking.,二、陳述不如倒裝妙,Never before have I seen suc

20、h a wonderful film.,I have never seen such a wonderful film.,1.否定詞開頭：,Not until/till 5 pm. did he come here yesterday.,It was not until/till 5 pm. that he came here yesterday.,He didn’t come here until 5 pm. yesterday.,O

21、n the top of hill stands an old temple.In the sky hang little stars.In the center of our school lies our library.,2. 地點狀語開頭,Only in this way can we achieve our goal.,3. Only+介詞短語：,Only in this way can I improve my Engl

22、ish.,Only by taking exercises can we keep healthy.,4. 形容詞+as+主語+be動詞：,Young as I am, I can manage it.,Badly injured as he was, he managed to take down the car’s number.,Child as he is, he knows a lot.Try as he may, he c

23、an’t catch up with them.Much as I have traveled, I haven’t seen as capable as John.,三、主動不如被動巧,We can borrow five books at most, and we can keep them for ten days.,At most five books can be borrowed at a time

24、 and they can be kept for ten days.,幾乎所有的狀語從句都可以變成獨立主格或分詞結(jié)構(gòu)，時間狀語從句，原因狀語，條件狀語等。If such is the case, you should apologize to her. 改成獨立主格或分詞結(jié)構(gòu) 將是你作文中最大的亮點！,四、從句不如分詞傲,口訣：一去，二看，三改。一去：去連詞；二看：看主語；三改：改分