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1、評卷實例2008年6月Directions:Fthispartyouareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicOnRecreationalActivities.Youshouldwriteatleast120wdsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:1.娛樂活動多種多樣2.娛樂活動有可能使人們受益，也可能有危害性3.作為大學(xué)生我的看法【2points】Ther

2、ehavealotrecreationalactivitiesfpeopletochoosef.Astorecreationalactivitiespeoplehavedifferentviewonit.Atfirstsomeonewhothinkthoseactivitiesaregoodnecessary.Becausetheycanhelppeopletorelaxfromthehardwkstudy.Itcannotonlyim

3、proveourbodybutalsoabettermood.Peoplecangotoseemoviessurfontheinterastheirrecreationalactivities.Onanotherhifwespendtoomuchtimeonsingingdancingotherrecreationalactivitieswewillhavebadinfluenceonhisdutiessuchasstudyingwki

4、ngwhichisinoppositeeffectbadly.Notlikingtherecreationalactivitieswecandosomemeaningthings.Itsbatterfuswhenwearestudyingwking.Sowemustgoawayfromit.SoIbelivethatasanuniversitystudentyoushoulddomuchrecreationalactivities.Bu

5、tweshouldhaveabalence.【5points】Todayrecreationalactivitiesisverypopular.Memepeopletaketimeinvarousfmsofit.PeoplewanttorelaxehavefunhecangosptssinginggodancinggotothemoviessurftheInter.Somepeoplethoughthavingrecreationala

6、ctivitiesgoodtopeople’sheathbothphysicallymind.SptsdancingcankeepusthinsurfingtheIntercanbringpeoplealotofinfmationknowledge.Wecanknowmeknowledgeaboutourtruerealityinlifethatdon’texistinourbooks.Howeverothersthoughtthatr

7、ecreationalactivitiesareharmtopeople.Becausespendingmuchtootimeonrecreationalactivitieswillinfluenceonpeople’swkstudy.Manystudentsarespendthemoneyoftheirparents.Thisquestionneedstothinkthink.AsacollegestudentIthinkrecrea

8、tionalactivitiesstudyarenotcontradict.Weshouldtryourbesttostudyhardwhenwestudyingenjoyourselveswhenwehavingrecreationalactivities.【8points】Inourpeople’sdailylifetherearevariousrecreationalactivitiesapartfromstudyingwking

9、.Therearebothoutdoindoactivitiesfustomakefunofsuchasplayingfootaballbasketballdancingplayingcomputergamessoon.Itgoeswithoutsayingthatrecreationalactivitiescangiveusmuchfunsomecouldbringexcitement.IfyousurftheInteryoucang

10、ettoknowpeoplefromanyothercountryinthewldtalkwiththemplaygameswiththem.Howeverwecannotdenythefactthatrecreationalactivitiescanalsocausesomedisadvantagesifwespendtoomuchtimeonit.Somepeopleevenlosetheirfamilyjobbecauseofdo

11、ingtoomuchrecreationalactivities.Inanutshellweshouldpaymeattentiontotheadvantagesofrecreationalactivities.Thebestwayistakepartinrecreationalactivitiesproperly.【11points】Intheeraofinfmationtechnologythereareallkindsofrecr

12、eationalactivities.Asthesayinggoes“AllwknoplaymakesJackadullboy.“Somepeoplethinkthoserecreationalactivitiesaregreatnecessarybecausetheycanhelppeoplerelax.Someoftheactivitiessuchashikingjoggingcanhelppeoplerelaxphysically

13、whilesomeofthemsuchassurfingtheIntercanhelppeoplerelaxmentallywhichmakespeoplefeelenergeticfanotherweek’swkload.Suchactivitiesareharmfulaswelltousifundertakeninappropriately.Becausewemayfailtoconcentrateonourdutiessuchas

14、studyingwkingwhichinturnmayleadtofurtherconsequences.AsfarasI’mconcernedrecreationalactivitiesshouldbedonewithinacertainlimitthatwecankeepaproperbalancebetweenrecreationstudyingwkinglife.【14points】Amongvariousrecipesonee

15、njoysinhiscollegeliferecreationalactivitiescanbynomeansbeigned.TherearenumerousactivitiessuchasspokenEnglishcompetitionssptseventsclubssocietiesofdifferentinterestswhichhelptomakecampuslifecolfuldiversified.Facingsomanyi

16、nterestingactivitieswecollegestudentshavetroublechoosingtheproperones.Asfreshmenweareconfusedbyallkindsclubstorecruitnewmembers.Therearetwooppositeviewsaboutrecreationalactivities.Onesaystheyexertpositiveinfluenceonastud

17、ent’sphysicalmentaldevelopmentftheycanexplestudents’talentdevelopstudents’abilityincommunicationteachthemtobemeindependent.Neverthelessoppositevoicescanalsobeheardbyassertingthatrecreationalactivitieswastetoomuchtimether

18、efemayhinderstudentfromfocusingontheirstudy.AsfmyselfI’mwiththeviewthatrecreationalactivitiesdomegoodthanharmbecauseIhavealwaysbeenoftheimpressionthatacollegestudentshouldpickupmepracticalskillstobebetterpreparedfthecare