公開課高中英語寫作課件[1]

1、,英語書面表達(dá),English Composition Writing,What makes a good essay?,The essay,A good essay is usually made up ofa topic paragraph, some supporting paragraphs and a concluding paragraph.,Topic paragraph Support

2、ing Paragraph 1 Supporting Paragraph 2 Supporting Paragraph 3Concluding paragraph,,To many students, school life is boring and tiring. However, I find my school life meaningful and colourful.,Topic paragrap

3、h (Introduction paragraph) General statement Topic statement,Supporting Paragraphs(Body) Paragraphs,TSSSSSSSSS,ConclusionPersonally,… in conclusion, in brief, From what has been discussed above,

4、 we may draw the conclusion that ... In summary, it is wiser ...,The paragraph,What makes a good paragraph?,A good paragraph is one that consists ofa topic sentence and supporting sentences.,There are different

5、kinds of bee. Some live in large groups like the honey bee, and make their nests in trees or holes in the rocks. Other species make their nests in holes in the ground. There are also varieties that do not live in groups

6、at all…,topic sentence,,Wherever you go in our school, you see green lawns and trees and beautiful flowers. Dotted among these trees and flowers are many buildings of different styles. A stream runs through our school an

7、d you always see everything reflected in the water.,Topic sentence:________________,just like a garden.,Our school is,just like a garden.,Our school is,A good paragraph is one that contains proper linking words.,I belie

8、ve English is more important than other foreign languages for many reasons. First of all, English is spoken by a large number of people, and these people are the most widely spread across the world in a great many countr

9、ies. Secondly, English is the most widely used language on the internet. It has become an on-line language. Thirdly, the 2008 Olympic Games will be held in our country and English will be very useful. Lastly, …,正確使用有關(guān)連接詞

10、,時間先后：,first, then, later, in the end, eventually,since then, after a while,轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系：,but, however, on the contrary, nevertheless,因果關(guān)系：,because, since, as, thanks to, owing to, as a result of, for the reason that,讓步關(guān)系：,thou

11、gh, although, even if, even though, in spite of the fact that,遞進(jìn)關(guān)系：,what’s more, in addition, furthermoreon the one hand …on the other hand,,條件關(guān)系：,if, unless, as long as, on condition that …,表 列 舉：,for example / instan

12、ce, take…for example, that’s to say, in other words, as follows,表 總 結(jié)：,in short, in brief, in conclusion, in a word, on the whole, as has been stated,A good paragraph is one with varied sentence patterns.,豐富的句式：(常用到的

13、句型結(jié)構(gòu)） 利用不同的句型來表達(dá)同一個意思， 能增加文章的文采。,e.g. What a kind boy he is! How disappointed he was !,感嘆句,強調(diào)句,e.g. It was this young boy that helped the old granny. I d

14、o hope you can come if possible.,e.g. Only in this way can you solve this problem. There comes the police car. Hardly had they got to the station

15、 when they met the young man.,e.g. They read while walking or riding on a bus. Come to me if necessary.,e.g. I saw a young lady walking slowly in the street

16、 with a handbag in her hand.,倒裝句,省略句,with短語,e.g. In my opinion, cyber cafes should be a place where we can find much useful information. Let’s come to the m

17、ain teaching building, at the back of which stands the school library.,定語從句,e.g. That’s what I should do.We should do a favour to whoever needs help at present.,各種名詞性從句,e.g. Ti

18、me passed quickly before we knew it. The moment we reached the farm, we got down to harvesting. So long as we work harder at our lessons, we’ll catch up sooner or later.,各種狀語從句,1. To hi

19、s surprise, the little girl knows so many things.（使用名詞性從句）2. Though I’m weak, I’ll make the effort. (使用倒裝句)3. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用強調(diào)句型) 4. I pass

20、ed the physics exam because of your help.(用虛擬語氣）,What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.,Practice 怎樣使用較豐富的句式和高級詞匯,Weak as I am, I’ll make the effort.,It was not until he had read the news in th

21、e newspaper that he knew what had happened.,I couldn’t have passed the physics exam but for your help.,5. She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (使用過去分詞)6. They sang and laughed as they went back to

22、school.( 使用V-ing形式)7.I won’t believe what he says. （no matter what狀語從句） 8.If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. （祈使句+and…）,Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab.,Singing and laughing, the

23、y went back to school.,No matter what he says, I won’t believe.,Study hard and you’ll make rapid progress.,,9．He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. (使用倒裝句)10.We all think he is a great man.

24、(think highly of)11.As a result the plan was a failure. (turn out)12. When he spoke, he felt more and more excited. (the more…the more),No sooner had he come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.,,We all think

25、 highly of him .,The plan turned out to be a failure.,The more he spoke, the more excited he felt.,Summary:,A good essay is usually made up of a topic paragraph, some supporting paragraphs and a concluding paragraph.,A g

26、ood paragraph is one that consists of a topic sentence and supporting sentences.,A good paragraph is one that contains proper linking words.,A good paragraph is one with advanced vocabulary and varied sentence patterns.,

27、Let’s improve it:,Good afternoon, everyone!    The topic of my speech today is “My Attitude to Pursuit of Fashion in School”. Now in our school there is a hot pursuit of fashion. Somestudents live a

28、 very expensive life … _______. _______, they hope to look smart and special. _______, they want to win others’ admiration and respect. In addition, it makes them feel cool . _______, we students should hold th

29、e right sense of values. We should practice thrift in our daily life . _____ , it is advisable for us to donate some pocket money to the Hope Project so that those poor children in rural areas can return to school.__

30、____, it is the inner beauty rather than our appearance that makes us respectable. Thank you for listening!,the reasons why they do so are as follows B. firstly C. last but not  least D. wh

31、at’s more E. as far as I am concerned F. Secondly,A,B,C,D,E,F,蘇州市2009屆高三教學(xué)調(diào)研測試,最近，國家教育部要求中小學(xué)生參加冬季長跑活動：建議小學(xué)生每天跑1000米，初中生1500米，高中生2000米。對此，有些人表示支持，有些人表示反對。請你根據(jù)以下材料，寫一篇以“Should we give more attention

32、to students’ health or grades?”為題的短文，談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?注意：1．詞數(shù)150左右。短文的開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)； 2．對所給要點，逐一陳述，設(shè)當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯。,1.A good beginning makes a good ending. 2.Your composition should be divided into paragr

33、aphs. 3.You’d better use some linking words. 4.Handwriting is of great importance.,Suggestions:,第一段：1.Some people agree to NO. One, because they usually think that ...In the meantime , ... In addition...2. 

34、;Some people think that A is right because ...3. Some people suggest / say that ... At the same time they point out the fact that...What’s more...4. Some people prefer NO. One. In their opinion A ... In addit

35、ion ...,第二段：1. On the other hand, some people hold that B is right. They think ...2.But many more people don’t agree with them. They prefer B. They say that...The reason is that...3.On the contrary, some people h

36、old that ...4.Some people think that B is better. It is clear that... What’s more, ...Also... 在第一段和第二段中一定要用原因或列舉等方式展開段落。,第三段：提出自己的見解并且加以論證1.In my opinion B is better than A. There is no doubt that ...2.I support A

37、. The reason goes as follows...3.As far as I am concerned, I agree to the latter. First...Second... Finally...4.It is likely that people will go on arguing over these questions. I think that everything has both its pos

38、itive and negative sides. We should keep an open mind.,5.People will continue to argue over the questions, I think we’d better keep an open mind because everything has two sides. It all relies on... 6.Of these two wa

39、ys of ...I prefer...First of all,... Second,...,Should we give more attention to students’ health or grades? The Ministry of Education of China has urged all the students to participate in the winter long-distanc

40、e running activity. It is suggested that primary school students should run 1,000 meters a day, junior school students, 1,500 and senior school students, 2,000.Different people always offer various views. Some people sa

41、y "yes" to this activity. They think, for one thing, it can make people pay more attention to physical education; for another, running can improve students’ health and help them study efficiently so they can ha

42、ve good grades. However, others hold opposite opinions about the activity. They believe that learning is the most important task for students and their future depends on their grades in their subjects. Meanwhile, many

43、can’t meet the high requirements. What’s worse, some will suffer cold and injuries. In my opinion, it’s all right for schools to care about students’ health and carry out the activity step by step. Remember a good bod

44、y helps make high efficiency.,What do you think about the concluding paragraph? Is it a good one? If not, how can you improve it?,In my opinion, it’s all right for schools to pay more attention to students’ health an

45、d carry out the activity step by step. Remember a good body helps make high efficiency.,In my opinion, it’s better for schools to pay more attention to students’ health and carry out the activity step by step, because a