重現(xiàn)新托福寫作30分無比自豪范文

1、重現(xiàn)新托福寫作重現(xiàn)新托福寫作30分無比自豪范文分無比自豪范文發(fā)布：北京雅思培訓(xùn)學(xué)校點(diǎn)擊數(shù)：發(fā)布時間：201032310:36:58好久沒有來過T版了，一來就發(fā)現(xiàn)自己的用武之地了。我2月22號考的，發(fā)過一個作文的帖子，我一會兒附在下面。作文：30分，不過都過了快2個月了，實(shí)在是不能重現(xiàn)當(dāng)時的作文了。只能大概回憶一下自己的文章脈絡(luò)。當(dāng)時的作文是TV應(yīng)該用于教育還是娛樂。我的立場是TV既要用于教育也要用于娛樂。開頭：當(dāng)時是提出自己的立場啦分論

2、點(diǎn)一：TV對于語言的教育很重要，然后我舉了CCTV9，說明CCTV9給我們提供了一個純英語的環(huán)境，還可以進(jìn)行互動。分論點(diǎn)二：TV對于科學(xué)的教育也是很重要的。論點(diǎn)一到論點(diǎn)二用了一個過渡句型，大概是：BesidesCCTV9thatprovidesanexcellentenvironmentfustostudyEnglishTVisalsoanimptantmediaftheeducationofscience.然后提到了CCTV10，然后

3、具體又說了我從CCTV10中學(xué)到了什么。我好像說了宇宙的起源，還說了我們不應(yīng)該連續(xù)坐在電腦面前超過半個小時，暗示ETS的IBT非常之不合理?。『呛?，不知道改卷的人讀出來我的INNUENDO沒有。分論三：直接轉(zhuǎn)折，轉(zhuǎn)到ENTERTAIMENT。這個地方其實(shí)我覺得很多人老覺得娛樂就是湖南衛(wèi)視那些娛樂圈的東西，從而限制了自己的發(fā)展空間。問大家一個問題：體育節(jié)目難道就不算娛樂了？TALKSHOW我只是點(diǎn)了一下沒有細(xì)說，重點(diǎn)放在了SOCCER上，

4、說自己是個SOCCERFAN，一周不看就活不了了呵呵。然后說APPRENTLYTHEREISASTRONGPUBLICDEMFIT。于是點(diǎn)明了娛樂很重要。最后：再一次點(diǎn)題，具體怎么點(diǎn)的已經(jīng)忘了。SRY。大概就這個樣子了，思路我個人覺得很明確，從分析到點(diǎn)交卷我用了25分鐘，剩下5分鐘不想檢查了，覺得也沒有什么大問題，因?yàn)楫?dāng)時自己的感覺就很好，我考完覺得應(yīng)該28以上，30分確實(shí)有點(diǎn)出乎意料。下面這篇我覺得也應(yīng)該是30分呵呵，好像我很自戀，不

5、過我真的是這么覺得：TOPIC:manypeoplebelievethatitisveryimptanttomakealargeamountofmoneywhileothersaresatisfiedtoearnacomftableliving.Analyzeeachviewpointtakeast.Notlongagotherewasasurveyonmycampusaskingstudentswhattheyexpectftheir

6、futureaftertheygraduate.Almost90%ofthemchoseeithertoearnacomftablelivingtomakealotofmoney.SinceI‘vebeenalwaysdreamingofbecomingamillionaireIchosetomakealotofmoney.Inmyopinionearningacomftablelivingisabasicrequirementfthe

7、future.Somepeoplearenotthatambitious.Theyjusthopethattheycanfindadecentjobthatenablesthemtosuppttheirfamilytheirchildren‘seducation.Infaceofthisglobaleconomiccrisismemepeoplearegoingunemployed.Therefeloweringtheirstardof

8、livingwouldbeagoodoptionfthem.Iguessalotofpeoplechoosetoearnacomftablelivingbecausetheyrealizedemingsomethingmeissimplytoohardtocometrueundercurrentcircumstance.HoweverIchosetheotheroptionbecauseIthinkearningalotofmoneyc

9、angivemyselfmeopptunities.FexampleifIhavealotofmoneythenononehIhavemechancestomeetwithotherrichpeople.TherefeIhavemeopptunitiestodobusinesswiththemattractmeinvestment.EventuallyIwillbeabletomakemememoney.OntheotherhifIdo

10、n‘twanttowkthathardanymeIcanretireatanytime.Idon‘tneedtowryaboutsupptingfamiliesmyselfaslongasIhaveastrongeconomicbase.What‘smeitwillenablemetohaveaverydecentliving.Earningalotofmoneynotonlyoffersmemeopptunitiesbutalsobe

11、nefitsotherpeople.Ialwayssympathizewithpeoplelivinginpocountries.Theyaresopothattheydon‘tevenhaverighttoaskftheirbasiclivingrequirementsuchasfoodwater.IfIhadenoughmoneyIwoulddonatemoneytothemdirectlytohelpthem.Ofcourseit

12、wouldnothelpeveryonemuchlesssolvetheoverallproblembutatleastsomepeoplewillbenefitfromthis.InadditionIcanalsoraiseafundtoprovidethemeducation.Thiswaytheywillhaveappropriateknowledgetoimprovetheirownsituation.Inthiscompeti