aeuueyc重現(xiàn)新托福寫作30分無(wú)比自豪范文

1、生命是永恒不斷的創(chuàng)造，因?yàn)樵谒鼉?nèi)部蘊(yùn)含著過(guò)剩的精力，它不斷流溢，越出時(shí)間和空間的界限，它不停地追求，以形形色色的自我表現(xiàn)的形式表現(xiàn)出來(lái)。－－泰戈?duì)栔噩F(xiàn)新托福寫作重現(xiàn)新托福寫作30分無(wú)比自豪范文分無(wú)比自豪范文發(fā)布：北京雅思培訓(xùn)學(xué)校點(diǎn)擊數(shù)：發(fā)布時(shí)間：201032310:36:58好久沒(méi)有來(lái)過(guò)T版了，一來(lái)就發(fā)現(xiàn)自己的用武之地了。我2月22號(hào)考的，發(fā)過(guò)一個(gè)作文的帖子，我一會(huì)兒附在下面。作文：30分，不過(guò)都過(guò)了快2個(gè)月了，實(shí)在是不能重現(xiàn)當(dāng)時(shí)的作文

2、了。只能大概回憶一下自己的文章脈絡(luò)。當(dāng)時(shí)的作文是TV應(yīng)該用于教育還是娛樂(lè)。我的立場(chǎng)是TV既要用于教育也要用于娛樂(lè)。開(kāi)頭：當(dāng)時(shí)是提出自己的立場(chǎng)啦分論點(diǎn)一：TV對(duì)于語(yǔ)言的教育很重要，然后我舉了CCTV9，說(shuō)明CCTV9給我們提供了一個(gè)純英語(yǔ)的環(huán)境，還可以進(jìn)行互動(dòng)。分論點(diǎn)二：TV對(duì)于科學(xué)的教育也是很重要的。論點(diǎn)一到論點(diǎn)二用了一個(gè)過(guò)渡句型，大概是：BesidesCCTV9thatprovidesanexcellentenvironmentfus

3、tostudyEnglishTVisalsoanimptantmediaftheeducationofscience.然后提到了CCTV10，然后具體又說(shuō)了我從CCTV10中學(xué)到了什么。我好像說(shuō)了宇宙的起源，還說(shuō)了我們不應(yīng)該連續(xù)坐在電腦面前超過(guò)半個(gè)小時(shí)，暗示ETS的IBT非常之不合理??！呵呵，不知道改卷的人讀出來(lái)我的INNUENDO沒(méi)有。分論三：直接轉(zhuǎn)折，轉(zhuǎn)到ENTERTAIMENT。這個(gè)地方其實(shí)我覺(jué)得很多人老覺(jué)得娛樂(lè)就是湖南衛(wèi)視那些娛

4、樂(lè)圈的東西，從而限制了自己的發(fā)展空間。問(wèn)大家一個(gè)問(wèn)題：體育節(jié)目難道就不算娛樂(lè)了？TALKSHOW我只是點(diǎn)了一下沒(méi)有細(xì)說(shuō)，重點(diǎn)放在了SOCCER上，說(shuō)自己是個(gè)SOCCERFAN，一周不看就活不了了呵呵。然后說(shuō)APPRENTLYTHEREISASTRONGPUBLICDEMFIT。于是點(diǎn)明了娛樂(lè)很重要。最后：再一次點(diǎn)題，具體怎么點(diǎn)的已經(jīng)忘了。SRY。大概就這個(gè)樣子了，思路我個(gè)人覺(jué)得很明確，從分析到點(diǎn)交卷我用了25分鐘，剩下5分鐘不想檢查了，

5、覺(jué)得也沒(méi)有什么大問(wèn)題，因?yàn)楫?dāng)時(shí)自己的感覺(jué)就很好，我考完覺(jué)得應(yīng)該28以上，30分確實(shí)有點(diǎn)出乎意料。下面這篇我覺(jué)得也應(yīng)該是30分呵呵，好像我很自戀，不過(guò)我真的是這么覺(jué)得：TOPIC:manypeoplebelievethatitisveryimptanttomakealargeamountofmoneywhileothersaresatisfiedtoearnacomftableliving.Analyzeeachviewpointtake

6、ast.Notlongagotherewasasurveyonmycampusaskingstudentswhattheyexpectftheirfutureaftertheygraduate.Almost90%ofthemchoseeithertoearnacomftablelivingtomakealotofmoney.SinceI‘vebeenalwaysdreamingofbecomingamillionaireIchoseto

7、makealotofmoney.Inmyopinionearningacomftablelivingisabasicrequirementfthefuture.Somepeoplearenotthatambitious.Theyjusthopethattheycanfindadecentjobthatenablesthemtosuppttheirfamilytheirchildren‘seducation.Infaceofthisglo

8、baleconomiccrisismemepeoplearegoingunemployed.Therefeloweringtheirstardoflivingwouldbeagoodoptionfthem.Iguessalotofpeoplechoosetoearnacomftablelivingbecausetheyrealizedemingsomethingmeissimplytoohardtocometrueundercurren

9、tcircumstance.HoweverIchosetheotheroptionbecauseIthinkearningalotofmoneycangivemyselfmeopptunities.FexampleifIhavealotofmoneythenononehIhavemechancestomeetwithotherrichpeople.TherefeIhavemeopptunitiestodobusinesswiththem

10、attractmeinvestment.EventuallyIwillbeabletomakemememoney.OntheotherhifIdon‘twanttowkthathardanymeIcanretireatanytime.Idon‘tneedtowryaboutsupptingfamiliesmyselfaslongasIhaveastrongeconomicbase.What‘smeitwillenablemetohave

11、averydecentliving.Earningalotofmoneynotonlyoffersmemeopptunitiesbutalsobenefitsotherpeople.Ialwayssympathizewithpeoplelivinginpocountries.Theyaresopothattheydon‘tevenhaverighttoaskftheirbasiclivingrequirementsuchasfoodwa

12、ter.IfIhadenoughmoneyIwoulddonatemoneytothemdirectlytohelpthem.Ofcourseitwouldnothelpeveryonemuchlesssolvetheoverallproblembutatleastsomepeoplewillbenefitfromthis.InadditionIcanalsoraiseafundtoprovidethemeducation.Thiswa