齊全的英語(yǔ)演講比賽點(diǎn)評(píng)模板

1、There are several aspects of language and speaking that I would like to focus on today for considerations to allow you to improve moving forward.First, the area of pronunciation and delivery. Some of you, especially when

2、 you are nervous, should focus more on diction and pronunciation. Specifically, try not to swallow your articles like “a“ and “the“ or little connectors like “of“ Take a breath, take your time. and let each word be sound

3、ed. Similarly, make sure you sound final consonants, especially the “-ed“ in your past tenses. This is one of the things that Chinese, even the good ones, the really good ones, when you start speaking quickly and passion

4、ately, forget. So, pay a lot of attention and be conscious that that's something that you may know that the grammars, grammatical and structural rules and not sound that final consonant or you may be a little fuzzy o

5、n what the past tenses, but that some- thing that makes a big difference in a competition,Finally, in the area of pronunciation for all you students, not just the contestants here today, please, the word “the“, th-: put

6、your tongue between your teeth. It's not “da,“ it's “the“; it's not “der.“ it's “their“; it's not “utter.“ it's “other.“ You can do this, you can do this, Practice on the way to class, practice in

7、 the shower, practice wherever but don't say “da,“ it's “the.“Second category of feedback is I want to talk very briefly about lexicon and vocabulary. As I mentioned, I felt that your use of lexicon in today'

8、s presentation was quite sophisticated and showed a lot of preparation. Most of you may have noticed that in the contemporaneous, spontaneous remarks and questions, the level of vocabulary came down a notch or two. That&

9、#39;s very natural: some- thing that we all have to work on. But there were a couple of I think. there's three examples that I'd like to share with you to take home to work on. Number one, since the topic was eco

10、logy, when you talk about living in harmony with da za ren, is it “the nature“ or “nature'? Nature! I's not “the nature“! “The nature“ is shenrna shenma dongxi de xingzhi, so, that was like one of those errors th

11、at. umm, came up because of the theme of the speech, but that's something you can remember right now, “Live in harmony with...nature.“' Second, some small things that I noted, some of you messed up “emphasized“ w

12、ith “emphasis“---it's a common mistake. And one of the contestants discourse. Some of you were speaking today in very. kind of written-prose language, and you may not want to do that in the future.Number two, piece o

13、f advice: Make a tape recording of yourself talking about abstract topics or complex topics and then go back and listen to it and listen to how it sounds: if it's cohesive and coherent'? Are there errors? Then go

14、 back, practice again, and do it a second time like editing a written text but, in fact, it's a spoken text. You will hear what you're doing that could be improved, even you, and of course if you have teachers, t

15、hat's even better, but you, yourself will hear.Finally, my last piece of advice for you is that you should practice building. If language, if spoken language, was like a house you should practice building the house b

16、rick by brick, storey by storey, so you all can do basic sentences now, clearly. And, most of you are pretty good at building paragraphs, but some of you are not yet perfect house builders in terms of discourse and organ

17、ization. So you want to practice writing compound and complex sentences, and then weave those together into paragraphs and you'll weave those paragraphs into the full spoken text. Weave them together, push yourself t

18、o go for the discourse and woven nature so that not only the thought flows, but it's coherent. And. I think you'll agree with me, that some of the most compelling speeches that we heard today displayed this type

19、coherence and sort of natural progression of ideas, lf you do that, there's no doubt in my mind that you can progress at this area.In conclusion, I would like to quote one of our question masters, who said today that