高三英語作文技巧課件

1、,高考復(fù)習(xí) ---書面表達(dá)評(píng)析及指導(dǎo),How to improve the writing skills,,,If you are the teacher 假定你是李華, 你的英國(guó)朋友Peter來信詢問你的英語學(xué)習(xí)情況并希望你簡(jiǎn)單介紹自己家鄉(xiāng)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)寫回信。要點(diǎn): 1. 我學(xué)英語已經(jīng)六年了，在老師和同學(xué)們的幫助下取得了一些進(jìn)步；2. 但是總覺得英語難學(xué)，尤其是英語中的一些習(xí)慣用法；3. 今后一定要努力學(xué)習(xí)這門有

2、用的外語，爭(zhēng)取能用流利的英語和你寫信；4. 我的家鄉(xiāng)發(fā)生很大的變化，蓋起了許多高樓，拓寬了道路，變得越來越漂亮和現(xiàn)代化；5. 如果有時(shí)間可以到中國(guó)來，我會(huì)帶領(lǐng)你參觀我的家鄉(xiāng)。,注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3. 開頭語已為你寫好。 June 8, 2008 Dear Peter, I'

3、;m very glad to receive your letter. I will tell you something about my English study and hometown. ………….,字?jǐn)?shù)不夠或未能傳達(dá)讀者任何信息，不得分。,samples of student work,Bad sample,卷面不整潔; 涂改較多;語言錯(cuò)誤多;層次不清;得11分,samples of student work,rea

4、d and write,find it hard,fluent English to write,Great changes,roads,,had taken place in my hometown,,buildings,widened,It will be wonderful when,you come to China if you are free,show you around,I will be glad to,語言不地道;

5、中文式思維;語言錯(cuò)誤較多，得分13分,samples of student work,影響書面表達(dá)得分的因素：,,“大錯(cuò)誤”包括時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤、句子結(jié)構(gòu)錯(cuò)誤、中式英語等，如：My hometown had big change, build many houses, …… My hometown has great changes.,◆語言表達(dá)出現(xiàn)“大錯(cuò)誤”及“小錯(cuò)誤”,→Great changes had taken place in

6、my hometown there. For example, many new houses had been built and roads had been widened.,3. If you get to China that have time, me with you look my hometown.4. I will welcome to you.◆“小錯(cuò)誤”主要是反應(yīng)在個(gè)別單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤、冠詞介詞

7、使用不準(zhǔn)確等方面,如： Under my teacher and classmates all help to me ,…….,,,→I hope you’l l get a chance to come to China and I’ll show you around my hometown if you are free .,→Welcome to China.,→With the help of my teachers and

8、 classmates,……,,,◆沒有使用高級(jí)詞匯和復(fù)雜句1. I will visit my hometown with you.2. If you have time, I will take you to travel around my hometown.,,→I will show you around my hometown if you are free.,,,◆書寫是否工整清晰也會(huì)影響答卷得分。卷面不整潔，涂改多；

9、大小寫;標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào);書寫不清，得分會(huì)很低！,◆ 審題不認(rèn)真，要點(diǎn)有所遺漏,1. 徹底理解題意，看準(zhǔn)答題要求（包括字?jǐn)?shù)要求）。2. 把內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)在稿紙上列成提綱。3. 連詞成句，連句成文。4.成文后認(rèn)真檢查，確信無一遺漏。,注意：,,★ 完全完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。★ 應(yīng)用了較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯?！?語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯方面有些錯(cuò)誤，但 為盡力使用較復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或較高級(jí)詞匯所致；具備較強(qiáng)的語言運(yùn)用能力?！?有效地使用了語

10、句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。,書面表達(dá)評(píng)分最高標(biāo)準(zhǔn)（第五檔 21---25分）,One possible version: June 8, 2008 Dear Peter, I'm very glad to receive your letter. I will tell you someth

11、ing about my English study and hometown. It is six years since I began to learn English. With the help of my teachers and classmates, I have made some progress in English. However I still find English hard to learn,

12、 such as some difficult idioms which made me confused. No matter how hard it is, I have made up my mind to master this useful language by my hard work.,Not long ago I returned to my hometown and found great changes had t

13、aken place there. Many new houses had been built and roads had been widened. My hometown is getting modern and more and more beautiful. I hope if you have a chance to come to China and I ’ll show you around my hometown w

14、hen you are on leave. Best wishes, Li Hua,My Suggestions:,1. beautiful words and expressions2. proper sentence structures3. connections between sentence

15、s4. proper complex sentences5. writing models,Six steps for writing (寫作六步驟）,,Dear Smith,Li Hua,Yours,,22,,,I was so pleased to hear from you and am writing to tell you something about my school. You’re r

16、ight. Quite a few changes have taken place in our school . On one side of the road is a new teaching building; On the other side,where the playground used to be, stands another new building-our libr

17、ary. The playground is now in front of the school .We have also planted a lot of trees in and round the school. I hope that you will be able to return and see the changes for yourself someday.

18、Best wishes,,詞匯反映你知識(shí)貯存量的多少，也是衡量英語水平的一個(gè)重要標(biāo)志。,運(yùn)用得當(dāng)?shù)木渥咏Y(jié)構(gòu)可以給文章增色不少，從而使整篇文章因此而生輝 。,使用恰當(dāng)連接詞，對(duì)寫一篇有“英語味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下銜接自然、緊湊。,增強(qiáng)書面表達(dá)效果的技巧,1. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable. (幸虧…)2.We all think he is

19、 a great man. （評(píng)價(jià)很高）3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea. （occur）,Thanks to the good weather, our journey was comfortable.,I. 怎樣使用較高級(jí)的詞匯,We all think highly of him .,A good idea occurred to me.,/ A good idea suddenly s

20、truck me.,4.The students there needn’t pay for their books.（免費(fèi)的）5. She went to Australia in order to study music. （purpose）6. When he spoke, he felt more and more excited. （the 比較級(jí)，the 比較級(jí)）,She went to Australia

21、 for the purpose of studying music.,The more he spoke, the more excited he felt.,Books are free for the students there.,,II. 豐富的句式：(常用到的句型結(jié)構(gòu)） 利用不同的句型來表達(dá)同一個(gè)意思，能增加文章的文采。 How happy I was when I received your letter!

22、 It was this young boy who helped the old granny. Only in this way can you solve this problem. They read while walking or riding on a bus.,1.感嘆句,2.強(qiáng)調(diào)句,3.倒裝句,4.省略句,I saw a youn

23、g lady walking slowly in the street with a handbag in her hand. Let’s come to the main teaching building, at the back of which stands the school library. That’s what I should do. Time passed quickly before we

24、knew it.,,5、with短語,6、定語從句,7、各種名詞性從句,8、各種狀語從句,III.常用的連接詞1. 表示遞進(jìn);在同一話題上補(bǔ)充內(nèi)容 另外，還有：2. 表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系 但是， 然而， 相反：,,what’s more; besides;also; moreover; in addition,but; however; yet; instead; on the other

25、 hand; on the contrary.,3. 表示因果關(guān)系 因?yàn)?，因此，所?4. 表示條件關(guān)系 如果，只要: 除非: 否則:,,since; as; because (of ); so; thus; therefore; as a result;,if ; on condition ( that );

26、as long as,unless,or else,5. 表示時(shí)間關(guān)系 當(dāng)… 的時(shí)候 : when ; while 在…之后: after 在…之前: before 直到: until 直到…才…: not……until…… 一…就… : as soon as 后來， 然后: later; afterwards 不久: soon 近來: lately; recent

27、ly 自從… :since 從那時(shí)起: from then on,,6. 表示特定的順序關(guān)系 首先:firstly 最主要的: above all 其次: secondly 然后: then; next 最后: finally; in the end7. 換一種方法表述 換句話說: in other words;

28、 that is to say;,,,8. 進(jìn)行舉例說明 例如，比如:9. 用于陳述事實(shí),for instance; for example; like; such as that is to say, namely, actually, and so on, believe it or not,　 to tell you the truth, for this reason,實(shí)際

29、上: in fact; actually; as a matter of fact跟你說實(shí)話 : to tell you the truth,,10.  對(duì)一個(gè)話題進(jìn)行總結(jié) 總而言之，總的來說:,on the whole; in short; all in all; in general; in a word, finally, in c

30、onclusion, generally speaking, as you know, in the end ,,其它常用到的副詞 therefore ; otherwise ; finally ; furthermore ; thus ; namely ; although ; afterwards ; personally;,12. 表示結(jié)果： thus, therefore, so,

31、as a result, seeing that, luckily, unfortunately 13. 表示強(qiáng)調(diào)： above all, indeed, surely, certainly, of course, after all, without any delay, at least, at most , most important, undoubtedly,,6. 表示特定的順序關(guān)系 首先:

32、firstly 最主要的: above all 其次: secondly 然后: then; next 最后: finally; in the end7. 換一種方法表述 換句話說: in other words; that is to say;,,Practice,,,Ladies and gentlemen,

33、 Welcome to our school !,① This village is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people.,It used to be very poor.,② However,,it has changed a lot since 1978 ③,and has been developing very fast.,

34、People here ④ live a much better life than before .,書面表達(dá)：,Now it is taking,on a new look.,,,In the past, the school here was very small ⑤ and most children couldn’t afford to go to school. ⑥,But now it has been rebui

35、lt ⑦ and,⑧ which has 4 storeys is the most beautiful one in the village.,All the school-age children can study here.,⑨ What’s more,,they enjoy free education.,⑩ May you enjoy your stay here,the newly built teaching build

36、ing,,/ May you have a pleasant time here!,Thank you.,,,,假定你是李華, 你的一位內(nèi)地朋友張貴來信向你咨詢?nèi)绾尾拍軐W(xué)好英語，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)寫回信.要點(diǎn): 1. 學(xué)英語的意義；2. 參加英語口語學(xué)習(xí)班;3. 看英文書刊、電視；4. 學(xué)唱英文歌曲；5. 與以英語為母語的人交朋友。,Writing,Homework,,注意：1. 詞數(shù)100-120左右；2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)

37、節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3. 開頭語已為你寫好。 November 26, 2008 Dear Zhang, I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn English well. __

38、_________________________________________________________________ Best wishes, Li Hua,to take a spoken English course; read more English newspapers and magazi

39、nes ; watch more English TV programmes; to learn and sing English songs; make more English friends/ make friends with the people who speak English as their first language/mother tongue,Brainstorming,Thank you fo