中考英語(yǔ)作文話題(二)　觀點(diǎn)建議

1、PART THREE,第三篇　寫(xiě)作妙解篇,話題(二)　觀點(diǎn)建議,,典例分析,自信賦予人力量,帶給人快樂(lè)。擁有自信,人生處處是舞臺(tái),生活越來(lái)越精彩。假如你是李華,請(qǐng)你為?？队⒄Z(yǔ)園地》“自信助我成長(zhǎng)”專欄寫(xiě)一篇短文,談?wù)勛孕诺闹匾?分享一次使你更加自信的經(jīng)歷,并說(shuō)說(shuō)我們?nèi)绾尾拍芨幼孕拧?[提示詞語(yǔ)]powerful, happy, believe in, keep doing[提示問(wèn)題]·Why is it impo

2、rtant to be confident?·What experience made you more confident?·How can we become more confident?,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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4、_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________,【寫(xiě)作架構(gòu)】,【思路點(diǎn)撥】1.要點(diǎn)提煉:本文是一篇記敘文,主題是觀點(diǎn)建議。根據(jù)題目要求,

5、可以提煉出3個(gè)要點(diǎn):(1)說(shuō)明自信的重要性(2)介紹一次讓你更自信的經(jīng)歷(3)說(shuō)明如何變得更自信2.時(shí)態(tài):一般過(guò)去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)3.人稱:第一人稱,【基礎(chǔ)寫(xiě)作】Ⅰ.根據(jù)所給提示詞補(bǔ)全下列各句1.對(duì)每一個(gè)人來(lái)說(shuō)擁有自信很重要。(It's important for…to…)________________________________________________________________________

6、__________________________2.自信可以給我們勇氣去堅(jiān)持自己想要做的事情。(stick to)Confidence can 　　　　　 　to 　　　 　what we want to do. 3.盡管我在家里練習(xí)了很多次,但是依然感到緊張。(although)　　　　　　　　　　 　　 for many times at home, 　　　　　　　　

7、　　　　.,It's important for everyone to be confident.,bring us courage stick to,Although I had practiced it I still felt nervous,4.我深呼吸并讓自己放松。(take a deep breath)

8、I 　　　　　　　　 　　and 　 . 5.我的老師高度評(píng)價(jià)了我的表演并且我從同學(xué)那里獲得了很大的鼓勵(lì)。(think highly of)My teacher 　 and I　 　 　　　 fro

9、m my classmates.,took a deep breath relaxed myself,thought highly of my performance got much encouragement,Ⅱ.句子升格按括號(hào)中的要求改寫(xiě)句子。6.I was in Grade 7.My teacher asked me to give a speech in class.(用as

10、連接兩個(gè)句子)____________________________________________________________________________________________________7.Confidence is important.Confidence is valuable, too.(用as well連接兩個(gè)句子)________________________________________

11、___________________________________________________________8.Being confident is important.Confidence can bring us courage to stick to what we want to do.(用for連接兩個(gè)句子)_____________________________________________________

12、______________________________________________,As I was in Grade 7, my teacher asked me to give a speech in class.,Confidence is important and valuable as well.,Being confident is important for it can bring us courage to

13、 stick to what we want to do.,9.We need to know our own advantages. We can build confidence.(用in order that連接兩個(gè)句子)_______________________________________________________________________________________________________1

14、0.Put in enough effort to what we do.(用It's necessary to…改寫(xiě)句子)_______________________________________________________________________________________________________,We need to know our own advantages in order that

15、we can build confidence.,It's necessary to put in enough effort to what we do.,【連句成文】 It's very important to be confident.Self-confidence can bring us courage to stick to what we do.So it's valuable to u

16、s. When I was in Grade 7, once my teacher asked me to make a speech in class.Although I had practiced it for many times at home, I still felt nervous and forgot the the beginning of it.Then, I breathed deeply and re

17、laxed myself.You can't believe how happy I was when I recalled the speech and finished it successfully.My teacher thought highly of my performance and I got much encouragement from my classmates.From then on, I have

18、become more and more confident. To build confidence, firstly, we need to clearly know about our own advantages and try to develop them. The most important is that we should put in enough effort to what we do.Then we

19、can finally make it and gain more confidence.,拓展積累,【導(dǎo)入主題】1.Being confident is so important that it can bring us courage to stick to things that we want to do.2.Self-confidence can help us overcome fear and face any cha

20、llenge bravely.3.Confidence is so valuable to us because it can help us face any difficulty bravely.,【描寫(xiě)經(jīng)歷】1.Although I had practiced it many times at home, I still felt nervous and forgot the beginning of it.2.My cla

21、ssmates clapped for me and smiled at me, which gave me much encouragement.,【總結(jié)感受】1.In order to build confidence, we need to clearly know what our strong points are and try to develop them.2.On the one hand, it's ne

22、cessary for us to know our advantages.On the other hand, we should put in enough effort to what we do.,實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練,,“百善孝為先”,孝敬父母是中華民族的傳統(tǒng)美德。某英語(yǔ)報(bào)社正在舉辦以“弘揚(yáng)中華傳統(tǒng)文化”為主題的征文活動(dòng),請(qǐng)你以“We should honor our parents”為題,寫(xiě)一篇短文參加征文活動(dòng)。內(nèi)容包括:你平時(shí)為父母

23、做些什么,你對(duì)孝敬父母的看法,以及作為中學(xué)生應(yīng)該怎樣孝敬父母。,[提示詞語(yǔ)]honor our parents(孝敬父母), duty, important, raise, housework, communicate[提示問(wèn)題]·What do you often do for your parents?·Why should we honor our parents?·How should w

24、e honor our parents?,We should honor our parents As we know, honoring our parents is an excellent tradition of China.__________________________________________________________________________________________________

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27、ble version:We should honor our parents As we know, honoring our parents is an excellent tradition of China.I honor my parents.I often help my parents do housework in my spare time.I think it's our duty to hono

28、r our parents.Our parents take much effort to raise us, so it's important for us to honor them.They love us so we should love and respect them. First of all, we should try our best to study hard to make them pro

29、ud of us.Then, we can help our parents with some housework because they are tired after working.Next, we should respect them and never talk to them rudely.We'd better communicate with them patiently if we have differ