非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在寫作中的應(yīng)用07170

1、Non- finite Verbs in writing非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在寫作中的應(yīng)用,,非謂語(yǔ),不定式（to do),V-ing,V-ed,,as a noun,as adj. or adv.,現(xiàn)在分詞,動(dòng)名詞,過去分詞,非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞 的分類,使用條件,一個(gè)句子當(dāng)中，已經(jīng)存在一個(gè)主句（謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞）,又沒有連詞的情況下, 還有別的動(dòng)詞出現(xiàn)時(shí),這些動(dòng)詞就充當(dāng)了非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞.,非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的,1 While she was getting me

2、 34 (settle) into a tiny but clean room, the head of the village was tying up his horse to……2 For example, the proverb, “plucking up a crop 32 (help) it grow”, is based on the following story. 3 He spat

3、it out, 37 (say) it was awful.4 I got on the bus and found a seat near the back, and then I noticed a man 18 (sit) at the front.,高考鏈接,settled,賓補(bǔ),to help,目的,saying,伴隨狀語(yǔ),sitting,賓補(bǔ),5 there was only a very sm

4、all amount of unfairness in the world, but everyone added a little ,always 25 (think) that it was only small and not very important。6 Football is played in more than 80 countries,      &#

5、160;  (make) it the most popular sport around the world.,thinking,伴隨狀語(yǔ),making,Ving 結(jié)果狀語(yǔ),找出非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞，并判斷成分,1.Smoking is not allowed in the meeting room.2.To play football is very interesting for those kids. 3.The c

6、over of a book entitled Wizard caught my attention.4.Who is the man shaking hands with our teacher?,,,,,v-ing作主語(yǔ),不定式作主語(yǔ),V-ed作后置定語(yǔ),V-ing作后置定語(yǔ),5.Scolded by her mother, the little girl sat there without lifting her head.

7、6.More and more people drive cars to work, placing much pressure on the traffic.7.Li Na has won the French Open，becoming the first Asian to win a Grand Slam.8.To help my disabled aunt，I spend an hour working in her hou

8、se every day.,,過去分詞作狀語(yǔ),,V-ing作結(jié)果狀語(yǔ),,V-ing作伴隨狀語(yǔ),,不定式作目的狀語(yǔ),寫作中非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞常見的錯(cuò)誤,1、狀語(yǔ)動(dòng)作行為者與主句主語(yǔ)不一致,1. Seeing from the top of mountain, the city is beautiful .,Seen from the top of mountain, the city is beautiful .,Correction,寫作中非謂

9、語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞常見的錯(cuò)誤,2、用V.ing短語(yǔ)充當(dāng)主語(yǔ)、表語(yǔ)和賓語(yǔ),2. In my opinion, climb mountain is an enjoyable thing.,In my opinion, climbing mountain is an enjoyable thing.,寫作中非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞常見的錯(cuò)誤,3、主動(dòng)、被動(dòng)含義混淆,3. —Which team is good at cooking? —A t

10、eam calling the supper cook.,A team called the supper cook.,1.因?yàn)樵谶@國(guó)家又沒有朋友，她覺得要想找到工作是不可能的。用連詞becauseBecause she has no friend in the country, she found it impossible to find a job.用非謂語(yǔ)結(jié)構(gòu)Having no friend in the coun

11、try, she found it impossible to find a job.,,,用非謂語(yǔ)結(jié)構(gòu)改寫和美化句子,2.這本用簡(jiǎn)易英語(yǔ)寫成的書很容易讀懂用定語(yǔ)從句 The book, is easy to understand.用非謂語(yǔ)結(jié)構(gòu) The book ,

12、 is easy to understand,用非謂語(yǔ)結(jié)構(gòu)改寫和美化句子,which was written in simple English,,written in simple English,,,3. Moyan stood there and was surrounded by many reporters.

13、 Moyan stood there surrounded by many reporters.,用非謂語(yǔ)結(jié)構(gòu)改寫和美化句子,←,① It is high time we took part in some activities. ② We want to make ourselves more healthy.,It is high time we took part in some activities to make

14、 ourselves more healthy.,4. 用非謂語(yǔ)結(jié)構(gòu)合并下列句子,用非謂語(yǔ)結(jié)構(gòu)改寫和美化句子,,,真題例證,非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在基礎(chǔ)寫作中的實(shí)際運(yùn)用,,(2014)人    物：英國(guó)人查理德·阿維斯（Richard Avis）出生日期：1974年12月1日目    的：理解不同文化中成功人生的含義時(shí)    間：2011年開始

15、在世界各地尋找同年同月同日生的人,Step1：拆分成幾個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句(中文),Step2：分別翻譯這幾個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句,1 Richard Avis was born on December 1, 1974.,2 He aims at understanding what a successful life means in different cultures.,3 He has been looking for time twins aro

16、und the world since 2011.,1 Richard Avis was born on December 1, 1974.2 He aims at understanding what a successful life means in different cultures. 3 He has been looking for time twins around the world since 201

17、1.,Step3：合并句子,Sentence1:,Born on December 1, 1974, Richard Avis has been looking for time twins around the world since 2011, aiming at understanding what a successful life means in different cultures.,.2009廣東高考基礎(chǔ)寫作：

18、你是校報(bào)小記者，最近進(jìn)行了一次采訪。以下是這次采訪的情況: 時(shí)間: 上周末 對(duì)象: 眼科醫(yī)生（eye-doctor）王教授 主題: 我國(guó)中小學(xué)生近視（short-sightedness） 問題,基本信息: （1）發(fā)生率: 略高于50％ （2）人數(shù): 世界第一,1.Slightly more than half of the school children in our country ar

19、e short-sighted. 2.It ranks the first in the world.,Step1：拆分成兩個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句(中文),Step2：分別翻譯這兩個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句,1.略高于50％的中國(guó)學(xué)生患有近視2.這在世界排名第一,合并句子,slightly more than half of the school children in our country are short-sighted and it ranks th

20、e first in the world.,2 非限制性定語(yǔ)從句,slightly more than half of the school children in our country are short-sighted, Which ranks the first in the world.,slightly more than half of the school children in our country are s

21、hort-sighted, ranking the first in the world.,3 非謂語(yǔ),1 并列句,2. 2010廣東高考基礎(chǔ)寫作： 受二手煙影響人數(shù)：約5.4億 因二手煙死忙人數(shù)：超過10萬(wàn)/年,1.Around 540 million people are affected by second-hand smoke2.it causes 100,000 deaths a year.

22、,,Step1：拆分成兩個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句(中文),Step2：分別翻譯這兩個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句,1.并列句 Around 540 million people are affected by second-hand smoke and it causes 100,000 deaths a year.,合并句子(并列句,非限制性定語(yǔ)從句,非謂語(yǔ),2.非限制性定語(yǔ)從句 Around 540 million people are affec

23、ted by second-hand smoke ， which causes 100,000 deaths a year.,3.非謂語(yǔ) Around 540 million people are affected by second-hand smoke, causing 100,000 deaths a year.,(2013)志愿者觀點(diǎn)厭倦地球生活，想體驗(yàn)火星生活1) because原因狀語(yǔ)從句Because

24、the volunteers get tired of living on the earth ，they have been looking forward to experiencing the life on the Mars 2) 非謂語(yǔ)Getting tired of living on the earth, the volunteers have been looking forward to experiencing

25、the life on the Mars.,Conclusion:,基礎(chǔ)寫作中，常用分詞短語(yǔ)作定語(yǔ)或者結(jié)果、伴隨狀語(yǔ)。,Nowadays, some students often cheat in exams. It is popular among students who are lazy and don’t work hard at their lessons. They cheat for they want to get hi

26、gher marks so that they can be praised or even admired. Also, some students who work hard at their lessons will cheat in exams because they are afraid of failing in exams.,用非謂語(yǔ)結(jié)構(gòu)美化文章,Homework,Thank you for listening!,Now

27、adays, some students often cheat in exams .It is popular among students who are lazy and don’t work hard at their lessons.,Nowadays, cheating in exams is popular among students who are lazy and don’t work hard at their l

28、essons.,用非謂語(yǔ)結(jié)構(gòu)美化文章,↓,They cheat for they want to get higher marks so that they can be praised or even admired.,They cheat to get higher marks so that they can be praised or even admired.,用非謂語(yǔ)結(jié)構(gòu)美化文章,↓,Also, some students

29、who work hard at their lessons will cheat in exams because they are afraid of failing in exams.,Being afraid of failing in exams, some students who work hard at their lessons will also cheat in exams,用非謂語(yǔ)結(jié)構(gòu)美化文章,↓,Nowaday

30、s, cheating in exams is popular among students who are lazy and don’t work hard at their lessons. They cheat to get higher marks so that they can be praised or even admired. Being afraid of failing in exams, some student