九年級(jí)英語全冊(cè)u(píng)nit10you'resupposedtoshakehands同步作文指導(dǎo)課件新版人教新目標(biāo)版

1、Unit 10 You're supposed to shake hands.,寫作題目 : Customs in China,know more about Chinese customs and introduce them to foreigners.,Learning aim:,Brainstorm- Table manners in different countries.,1. You’re supposed

2、to eat with your hands.,2. You’re not supposed to stick your chopsticks into the food.,3. The youngest person is expected to start eating first.,4. You’re supposed to put your bread on the table.,5. It’s impolite to use

3、 your chopsticks to hit an empty bowl.,India,China,Korea,France,China,,,,,Notes6. It’s important to do sth. 10. You should / shouldn’t do sth.7. Don’t forget to do sth. 11. It’s polite to do st

4、h.8. Remember to do sth. 12. You could / couldn’t do sth.9.You’d better do sth. 13. You’d better not do sth.,Warming up,Chinese customs,shake hands,let the old eat first,stick the chop

5、cticks into the food,point at anyone with the chopsticks,make noise,Making sentences,,,Complete the sentences according to the situations.,① When you meet people for the first time in China, you________________.② If the

6、re are older people at the table, you _________________________. Instead ,you _________________.③ It __________________________________while you are eating with chopsticks.④ You __________________________ ,either.⑤

7、You __________________________ when you are eating dinner.,are supposed to shake hands,should let the old eat first,,are not supposed to start eating first.,,is impolite to stick your chopsticks into your food,shouldn

8、9;t point at anyone with your chopsticks,are not supposed to make any noise,Mind our manners in China,China is a country with a long history, so there are many customs.Firstly，Secondly,What’s more,Besides,,If you ar

9、e going to China, please follow these customs.,Reading for the writing structure,閱讀Section B 2b 文本的第二個(gè)段落,提取段落的框架,主題句：細(xì)節(jié)句：結(jié)尾句：,,a.b.c.d.,My biggest challenge is learning how to behave at the dinner table.,F

10、or example, you’re not supposed to put…,Another example is that you’re not supposed to eat …,Another thing is that it is impolite to say …,Also, you’re not supposed to put…,I have to say that I find it difficult to remem

11、ber everything but I’m gradually …,,,,,Writing task,你的法國(guó)筆友Mark將要到中國(guó)來學(xué)習(xí)交流。他想向你了解一些中國(guó)習(xí)俗，如見面、餐桌、參加派對(duì)等禮儀。請(qǐng)你寫一封80詞左右的信告訴他在中國(guó)如何表現(xiàn)得體。信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)內(nèi)。Dear ______________, You must be excited about coming to China soon. Le

12、t me give you some suggestions about Chinese customs.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Have a safe trip, and I look forward to meeting

13、you soon!Best wishes,____________,Writing step1:,構(gòu)思段落,Topic sentence (at the beginning )detail 1 ( meeting people for the first time)detail 2 ( how to behave at the dinner tabledetail 3 ( going to a party)

14、Conclusion (at the ending),,details about customs,Think of the sentence patterns you learned to give advice,You're supposed to…You're expected to … You should …You're not supposed to …It's impolite /r

15、ude to …,One important thing is that … Another example is that … Also, … There is one more thing you need to know…,Think of the expressions in Section B 1b ,2b to help express your ideas clearly and fluently,Writing

16、 step2:,聯(lián)想詞塊,Writing,你的法國(guó)筆友，Mark，將要到中國(guó)來學(xué)習(xí)交流。他想向你了解一些中國(guó)習(xí)俗，如見面、餐桌、參加派對(duì)等禮儀。請(qǐng)你寫一封80詞左右的信告訴他在中國(guó)如何表現(xiàn)得體。信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)內(nèi)。Dear ______________, You must be excited about coming to China soon. Let me give you some suggestion

17、s about Chinese customs.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Have a safe trip, and I look forward to meeting you soon!Best wishes,____

18、________,Dear ______________, You must be excited about coming to China soon. Let me give you some suggestions about Chinese customs. In China, when you meet people for the first time, you‘re expected to shake han

19、ds. One important thing is that you should learn how to behave at the dinner table. For example, you’re supposed to let the old eat first if there are old people at the table. Another example is that you‘re not supposed

20、to stick your chopsticks into your food. Also, it’s rude to point at anyone with your chopsticks. And there is one more thing you need to know. You shouldn‘t make any noise while you are eating. If you go to a party, you

21、 are expedted to be on time . Although things here are quite different from the way they are in your country, I believe you ’ll get used to them . Have a safe trip, and I look forward to meeting you soon!Best wis

22、hes, Yours ,,,Main body,ending,beginning,,,1.確定體材：,2.確定時(shí)態(tài):(Tense),The present tense,應(yīng)用文：E-mail,3.布局謀篇:,Outline,,,,,,,欣賞角度：

23、 1. 寫作基本要求:人稱, 時(shí)態(tài), 2. 要點(diǎn)齊全, 3. 結(jié)構(gòu): 開頭，正文，結(jié)尾, 4. 好詞好句。,注意：（作文通用修改字符：優(yōu)美句子～；漏詞∧；錯(cuò)處：○；刪除\；語法錯(cuò)誤 G ,人稱錯(cuò)誤 P，時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤 T ）,互評(píng),①請(qǐng)交換習(xí)作互相欣賞，

24、用紅筆劃出對(duì)方的亮點(diǎn),并對(duì) 不足的地方進(jìn)行適當(dāng)修改。②你能給同學(xué)什么建議，使得對(duì)方的習(xí)作更好呢？③根據(jù)worksheet上的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，給同伴的習(xí)作打分。,,集體賞析，共同進(jìn)步,Task 3,Summary,反思與小結(jié)：,1. 我們是否懂得按照“主題句—細(xì)節(jié)句”展開段落寫作；,2. 寫作時(shí)是否做到學(xué)以致用，運(yùn)用閱讀文本中所學(xué)的句型靈活進(jìn)行表達(dá)：,3. 評(píng)價(jià)同伴的習(xí)作時(shí)有沒有先從整體上審視全文，從他人的習(xí)作中吸取寫作的