高中英語短文改錯-附答案

1、改錯一改錯一Ihaveagoodfriendwho’snameisLiuMei.Sheisourmonitoneoftheexcellentstudentinourclass.Althoughsheiscleverbutshewksveryhard.Wehavealotoncommonhavealottotalkabout.Oneeveningshetoldmethatsomethinghappenedwhenherparentswas

2、out.ShewasdoingherhomewksoneSundaymningwhenshesmeltsomethingburning.Shestoppedlookoutofthewindowfindacloudofsmokecomingoutofherneighbour’shouse.Shecalled119immediate.Tenminuteslaterthefiremencameputoutfire.Herneighbourwa

3、sverythankfulfherhelp.改錯二改錯二Iwenttoseethefilmaftersupper.OnmywaythecinemaImetanEnglishwomanwholostherway.Igaveupthechanceseethefilmtookhertoherhotel.WhilegothereItoldheraboutgreatchangesthathadbeentakenplaceinthepastfewy

4、earsshehadtoldmeanythingabouthercountry.AlthoughImissedthefilmIstillfeltveryhappyfIhadnotonlyhelpedheroutoftroublebutpractisemyspokenEnglish.IfIhadnotwkedhardonEnglishIwouldhavebeenabletohelphim.改錯三改錯三DearRalphImasenistu

5、dent.Imgettingwellwithaboyinmyclass.ButIhavefalleninlovewithhimfalmosthalfayear.HeisshyboysoIwrotehimaletterfirsttoexpressmyfeeling.Hewroteback.Inhisletterhesaid“Wearestudents.Ourtaskisstudyhard.Letustowaitseewhetherweha

6、vesomechanceaftergraduation.“SoaftergraduationItelephonedtohimaskhimaboutgoingout.Buthesaidhedidntwantto.HejustwantedtosleepwatchedTV.WhatdoyouthinkIshoulddoDoyouthinkIshouldcontinuetolovehimgiveup改錯四改錯四DearBobHello.Ilea

7、rnaboutyoufrommyEnglishteacherMissFang.I’dliketoyourpenfriendgettoknowmeaboutyourcountry.Firstletmetellyousomethingmeaboutmyself.MynameisLiHua.IliveinBeijingwhereisthecapitalofChina.IgotoHongqidleSchool.Westudyquiteafews

8、ubjectsuchasmathsChineseEnglishphysics.IusetoplaypingpongalotonmysparetimebutnowIaminterestinginfootball.DoyouplayanyballgamesWhatyourfavitesptIlookfwardtohearfromyousoon.YoursLiHua答案：改錯一：whos改為whose2.正確3.去掉but4.on改為in5.

9、parents后加were6.homewks改為homewk7.stopped后加to8.find改為found9.immediate改為immediately10.fire前加the改錯二：the改為a2.正確3.see前加to4.go改為going5.去掉been6.去掉had7.去掉but8.去掉had9.on改為at10.him改為her改錯三：1.getting后加on或along2.fallen改為been3.shy前加a4

10、.feeling改為feelings當(dāng)情感講時feeling常用單數(shù)5.study前加to或study改為studying6.去掉to7.去掉to8.watched改為watch9正確10.改為改錯四：1.learn改為learnt或learned。2.to后加be或become。3.刪去me。第一次告訴Bob關(guān)于自己的一些事情，此處用me不合邏輯。4.where改為which。在此非限定性定語從句中，關(guān)系詞在從句中作主語，故用whic

11、h。5.此行無錯。6.subject改為subjects。quitsafew意為“相當(dāng)多”，修飾可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)。7.use改為used。據(jù)下文butnow可知，此處應(yīng)用usedtodo表示“過去常常做某事”。8.interesting改為interested。beinterestedin…為固定短語，“對……感興趣”。9.What后加is。此句無謂語。10.hear改為hearing。lookfwardtodoingsth.為固定短語。改

12、錯五：答案：76去掉to短語錯誤。goabroad“出國”。77present→presents名詞的數(shù)錯誤。present“禮物”，是可數(shù)名詞。78去掉第二個were動詞錯誤。interest在此是及物動詞用法，意為“使……感興趣”。beinterestedin“對……感興趣”。79buys→bought時態(tài)錯誤。由全文可知，用一般過去時態(tài)。80√81them→it代詞錯誤。在這本書里有關(guān)于肢體語言的圖片和不同國家的語言習(xí)俗。用it指

13、代這本書。82put前加been語態(tài)錯誤。我的禮物被放在了你的臥室里了。禮物是被放在臥室里，所以用被動語態(tài)。83that→which定語從句關(guān)系詞錯誤。介詞后用which，不用that。84but→連接邏輯錯誤。前后是并列關(guān)系而非轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系。85few→little混淆錯誤。alittle與little可以用作副詞，表示“有點”“稍稍”，修飾動詞、副詞、形容詞或介詞短語。如：Heisalittletired.他有點累了。而afew不可用作