2012年浙江省高考英語(yǔ)主觀題部分評(píng)卷信息反饋與思考

1、,你校正在進(jìn)行“英語(yǔ)讀書周”活動(dòng)。該活動(dòng)要求學(xué)生摘錄名言佳句（quote）并相互交流。以下是某同學(xué)摘錄的句子：“Your future depends on many things, but mostly on you.”。請(qǐng)按下列要求用英語(yǔ)寫一篇100-120個(gè)詞的短文：1.針對(duì)摘錄句中的觀點(diǎn)談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ?.舉例說(shuō)明理由。注意：短文的開頭已給出（不計(jì)詞數(shù)）。In the English Reading Week, one o

2、f my classmates recommended a quote to us, which goes like this:" Your future depends on many things, but mostly on you." _____________________________________________________________________,題目?jī)?nèi)容要點(diǎn)分析,,,I am q

3、uitely agree with the view.Confidence attaches great significance to our future because life is mostly based on ourselves .Actually, the life likes test.Therefore, I believe by harding work, I will achieve my dream.

4、The quote is short, but it leave a deep impress to me and make me think a lot. In my opinion, environment, parents, friends and so on do have a great influence to us.We always dream to be successful.We must will need t

5、eachers’help,friends’ encouragement, parents’love.,,2012年浙江省高考英語(yǔ)主觀題部分評(píng)卷信息反饋與思考,浙江省溫州二中 黃躍躍,,評(píng)卷程序概述主觀題部分評(píng)卷情況反饋與分析對(duì)高中英語(yǔ)教學(xué)的幾點(diǎn)建議,一、評(píng)卷程序概述,評(píng)卷教師構(gòu)成評(píng)卷質(zhì)量保證可能調(diào)整評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn) （要點(diǎn)是否齊全）,二、主觀題部分評(píng)卷情況反饋與分析,歷年試題難度,,Two years before, I trave

6、lled to Brazil and I rented for a car. agoUnfortunate, I had an accident and hit another car and I needed Unfortunately,to stay in a hospital for at least two week. I called my parents

7、 weeks , so I did not tell them what had happened. I knew that they will but

8、 wouldbe worried about myself because I was so farther away, and me farthat my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them i

9、nterested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil. As a interestingresult, nobody knew truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do.,短文改錯(cuò),,,,the,《新概念英語(yǔ)2》special difficulties,,你校正在進(jìn)行“英語(yǔ)讀書周”活動(dòng)。該活動(dòng)要求學(xué)生摘錄名言佳句（quote

10、）并相互交流。以下是某同學(xué)摘錄的句子：“Your future depends on many things, but mostly on you.”。請(qǐng)按下列要求用英語(yǔ)寫一篇100-120個(gè)詞的短文：1.針對(duì)摘錄句中的觀點(diǎn)談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ?.舉例說(shuō)明理由。注意：短文的開頭已給出（不計(jì)詞數(shù)）。In the English Reading Week, one of my classmates recommended a quote

11、to us, which goes like this:" Your future depends on many things, but mostly on you." _____________________________________________________________________,題目?jī)?nèi)容要點(diǎn)分析,,1）“五檔”評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)注意內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)、應(yīng)用詞匯和語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)的豐富性和準(zhǔn)確性、上下文的連貫性

12、。第五檔（25-30分）血肉骨氣備之第四檔（ 19-24分）云而通之第三檔（13-18分）知所云，但未周之第二檔（7-12分）知所欲云，然未能云第一檔（1-6分）不知所云 （黃會(huì)健）2）詞數(shù)、拼寫與標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)、書寫,評(píng)判標(biāo)準(zhǔn),,書面表達(dá)整體分析,,試題難度：1）題目指導(dǎo)語(yǔ)不夠明確 2）開放度較高 3）任務(wù)缺乏情景創(chuàng)設(shè)的真實(shí)性

13、 4）學(xué)生對(duì)主題內(nèi)容體驗(yàn)不夠（賴朝暉） 學(xué)生： 1）缺乏良好的審題習(xí)慣，沒有深度理解題意。 2）缺乏舉例說(shuō)明或說(shuō)理、舉例背離主題。 3）缺乏個(gè)性看法和追求獨(dú)立思考的能力， 思維停滯。 4）缺乏語(yǔ)篇能力和整合語(yǔ)言的能力。 5）背套路；硬套范文；使用不靈活，舉例不合理，不能自

14、圓其說(shuō),考生失分原因分析,,動(dòng)詞句子結(jié)構(gòu)混亂或錯(cuò)誤漢語(yǔ)式英語(yǔ)拼寫錯(cuò)誤派生詞使用錯(cuò)誤 （success succeed successful）代詞連接詞誤用、濫用套句說(shuō)空話、無(wú)思維,考生語(yǔ)言失分錯(cuò)例收集與分析,,1.認(rèn)真研讀《課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)》和《考試說(shuō)明》，注重思維能力與習(xí)慣的培養(yǎng)和語(yǔ)言的訓(xùn)練相結(jié)合。 “使用語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊”注重認(rèn)知能力、言語(yǔ)信息、情感策略、文化意識(shí)等的培養(yǎng)充分利用教材,三、對(duì)高

15、中英語(yǔ)教學(xué)的幾點(diǎn)建議,,欣賞借鑒模仿,文章立意 文章結(jié)構(gòu)修辭手法 佳句欣賞難句解析 銜接語(yǔ)運(yùn)用,MIUI FriendshipReading : Anne’s best friend,Appreciate all the words or expressions in terms of the “description of surroundings” in the diary.

16、Divide these words or expressions in two catalogues and tell the reasonAppreciate all the descriptions about Anne’s feelings.What can be inferred from the description of Anne’s feelings?Write a short diary in the nam

17、e of Anne, describing nature in Anne’s eyes and her deep feelings if Anne regained freedom after the war.,,2.重視寫作教學(xué)；落實(shí)寫作訓(xùn)練循序漸進(jìn)積累語(yǔ)言 --- 篩選、講解、情境創(chuàng)設(shè)、鞏固背誦范文、美文針對(duì)性訓(xùn)練語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用實(shí)際 eg: 記敘事件明確記敘文和事件記敘文的要素了解記敘文應(yīng)注意點(diǎn)羅列常用表達(dá) （如 時(shí)間